In the grand design of things you'll get  an A with regard to effort. Exactly where you lost everybody ended up being in the specifics. You know,  people say, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me say to you just what exactly did give good results. The writing is certainly incredibly engaging which is probably why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can easily see a jumps in reasoning you make, I am not convinced of exactly how you seem to unite the points which in turn help to make the conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but wish in the foreseeable future you link your dots much better.