In this grand pattern of things you'll get  an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually confused me personally ended up being on all the details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you just what exactly did work. The article (parts of it) is certainly very powerful which is possibly the reason why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can notice a leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect your ideas that produce the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your point but wish in the future you connect your dots much better.